Dear all writing expert:
For a proposal writing, date of proposal is 27 Oct, 2007:
『I am interested in organizing a promotion and exhibition event for Sunshine Hotel in coming November．』
My teacher just cross out "coming", Why ? I want to say:
在來緊的十一月, 我好有興趣想幫陽光酒店攪一個宣傳同展覽活动。
Pls explain why I have to delete "coming"?
English : Why is not correct to say that
2007-11-29 1:32 am
回答 (2)
2007-11-29 1:53 am
✔ 最佳答案
用 Coming吾係錯, 不過大點多餘. November經已代表係來緊的十一月, 除非有機會俾讀者以為係明年的十一月, 但機會好細. 寫英文, 正所謂多字不如少一字. 中文都應該寫成 "我好有興趣想幫陽光酒店係十一月搞一個宣傳同展覽活动"如你係要用 "Coming", 就可寫成"... for Sunshine Hotel in the coming month".
2007-11-29 8:57 am
『I am interested in yahoo a dog and exhibition event for yahoo cat Hotel in coming November．』
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