改句英文應該點寫?!

大家不應該照字搬紙，是不建康的英文。
看我的：
Listen, life's not fair. I have paid my best but I've never gotten any positive effect. That's life! Now, I extremely hate the earth.

大概喺咁樣吧！外國人先自get到這樣o既meening ga！

2007-11-28 18:18:12 補充：
edwardk0218
[大學級 1 級]The world really treat me unfair.不太正確，The world 唔喺人o黎ga，不可以treat你。加之unfair.喺形容詞唔可以用來收飾lei 個"treat"ga。

The world is not fair to me.

The world really treat me unfair