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2007-11-28 6:36 pm
In our presentation, our group has strengths and weaknesses. About the strengths, our power point is wonderful, and our present is fluently. About the weaknesses, our time is not enough. Therefore, I must improve the time of the control.

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2007-11-28 10:49 pm
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There are strengths and weaknesses in the presentation of our group. Our strengths are the wonderful & powerful points and our fluent presentation. Our weaknessess are the restriction & ineffective uses of time. Therefore, we must control the time.
2007-11-28 8:08 pm
Our group has strengths and a weakness in presenting. Our strengths are presenting fluently and wonderfully. Our weakness is time shortage. Therefore, we must update our time management.

2007-11-28 12:10:25 補充:
Our group has(Have) strengths and a weakness in presenting. Our strengths are presenting fluently and wonderfully. Our weakness is time shortage. Therefore, we must update our time management.
2007-11-28 7:03 pm
In our presentation, our group has strengths and weaknesses. About the strengths, our slides are wonderful, and we presented fluently. For the weaknesses, we have a little bit overrun. Therefore, we must improve in controlling the time.


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