中文作文...幫幫我

2007-11-27 11:28 pm
題目是......
~~一個難忙的地方~~..
應該點作
比個大綱我(要詳細一D)
唔該

回答 (4)

2007-11-27 11:44 pm
✔ 最佳答案
好難答你wor......
難忘 定係 難忙......
你真係要諗下自己的難忙地方.....唔係人地可以幫倒你.....如果幫你寫你細,不如幫你作.....

你都可以咁寫....

1. 倒敍法-
描述你見倒的一樣野(相片啊 / 係個個地方執倒的野----仔細描述,然後令你諗起果一個難忘的地方....

2. 之後開始寫時,地,人.......(仔細描述)

3. 發生咩事......敍述

4. 點解令你難忘.....

5. 感想 / 扮望 (e.g. 如果可以的話............)
2007-11-28 12:41 am
1)令你最開心(認識新朋友、生日.)或最傷心(有人死了)或做錯事(改過自身)。
2)日期、時間、地點
3)內容---將發生事情的經過、人物記述下來,其他人感到怎樣(有什麼行動、心情如何..)
4)表達自己的感受,日後會怎樣做。
2007-11-27 11:50 pm
~~一個難忙的地方~~

你可以寫

(1)(因為這個地方是我生日地點)

(2)(因為我的祖父往在這裏)
參考: 自己
2007-11-27 11:44 pm
The place should give you happy, sweet or sad or something is very impressive at your heart. e.g. graduation ceremony, or at the examination hall, e.g. you have been well prepared for the exam, but the day was too excited and totally forgotten what you had studies before.

- What caused you so happy or excited? or sad?
- What person you think of e.g. at the airport, your uncles' family migrated to a new country....
- e.g. at restaurant, your friend give you a surprising celebration....
- e.g. at home, your mother baked you a cake, because of your hard work study or hard work at office,... so you find home is the most warm place in the world.....


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