各位高手 幫小妹睇下英文文法睇D咩 THANKS

I only corrected some of your grammer problem, hope this can help you.

I feel much better knowing that you're okay.
I really don't feel like working tomorrow since I'm so exhausted.
I want to go back to Disneyland and spend my time there to play again, but it's just impossible.
So do you still need to go to school this week?
How is your school life?

I think is this....I THINK ONLY

I feel much better to know that you're well.
I really don't feel like to working tomorrow. I'm so exhausted. I want to go back to Disneyland to play. But it's impossible!
So are you need to go to school this week?
How's your school life?


PS : your English is very well

I feel much better after knowing that you're fine.
I'm really unwilling to work tomorrow as I'm so exhausted. I prefer to go to Disneyland again, but it's impossible!
So do you still need to go to school this week?
How's your school life?

I feel much better that you're fine.
I don't want to go to work tomorrow as I exhausted, I prefer to go to Disneyland again, but I know it's impossible.
So, will you still need to go to school this week? How's your school life?