幫我see下我ｏ的文，有咩錯　比個分我（１篇）

I have a cat. It's white and blue. It looks like a tight. It's very lovely. I like it very much. It's name is mimi.

先分析呢段

1)It looks like a tiger. (tight係 好緊 既意思)

2) 介紹隻貓個名, 應該放係 I have a cat 後面, 要比人知道個名先

3) 名字應該大階

4) its name is Mimi. it's 係它是, its 係它的

4) It's white and blue. It looks like a tiger, 用and, 所以變成 It's white and blue, and It looks like a tiger. (藍白色既貓唔太似老虎...= ='')


It has two smallears. It's nose is white. Many people like it because itis very funny and lovely.

1) It has two small ears.

2) its nose is white. (its 係 它的)

3) every one likes it because it is very funny and cute. 用every one係因為形容到每個人都鐘意佢, many people 多數用係人數, 就好難用係呢個方面既 用cute係因為無咁悶呀~~用下其他形用詞先好~~

2007-11-26 21:35:14 補充：
咩叫比個分你?如果out of 10既話... 7/10啦你係差在於d句子組合同埋串字, 其他都好好, 文法都唔錯

My pet

I have a cat.
(或者 I own a cat,
own是“拥有“，属于你的东西，尤其是你买回来的）

It's white and blue.
这里的 it's = it is, 正确的。

不懂你的宠物是什么颜色，
但是白与蓝色？
若是接近蓝色，可以说
It's almost blue in color (= 差不多是蓝色）

It looks like a tight.
有问题。
tight 是形容词(或 动词tighten)，
不可以当名词用的，
tights 是丝袜
（如上班族女生爱穿的、从脚穿到腰的那种）。

然而， a 后面是名词，
我想，你是否要说是 “tie” 领带呢？
若是
It looks like a tie.
@
It looks as if it is a tie.

It's very lovely.
I like it very much.
没有问题。
可以说 --
It's lovely and I really like it.
或者
It's lovely.
It's my precious pet. (它是我珍贵的宠物)
@
I treasure it a lot. （我很宝贝它的。）


It's name is mimi.
It's = it is 它是
its = 它的
你可以说--
1. It's Mimi.它是咪咪

2. Its name Mimi. 他的名字是咪咪
（ Its name is Mimi也可以，但是
is可以不用放，也能明白）

3. I named it Mimi.我叫它咪咪



It has two smallears.
想必，你打错字了，
It has two small ears.

或许你可以说
It has small ears.
就够了，
因为two small ears有点奇怪，
耳朵都是两只的，很少人会说明。

It's nose is white.
It's = it is 它是
its = 它的
Its nose is white.
@ It has white nose.


Many people like it because itis very funny and lovely.
想必，你打错字了，你想写
Many people like it because it is very funny and lovely.
对吧？
可是，很少会用funny滑稽来形容宠物，
我觉得adorable可爱，比较好。

Many people like it because it is lovely and adorable.
@
It's pleasing. （它带给我们很多欢乐）

2007-11-27 14:32:49 補充：
给分吗？大家一起学习。我不是老师，但是给意见就可以啦...你很聪明，选择一些简单，易懂的字来造句，虽然若用一些深奥点的字也会比较高分，但是用错的机会较大，没把握的，就选用简易的字来造句就对了。还有，在写 It's 时， 不懂做么， 明明写 ‘ 的，不懂为何会变成 &#39...在这里写 it's 没关系，但是写在功课上的，最好写 it is （除非是对话，不然其他书写都是写全字的）不过你明白就可以了。谢谢。