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Japan is my favourite travel country because I like every kind of Japan goods, including sushi, sashimi, clothes, etc.

I become a shopaholic in Japan because all goods in here are cheaper than Hong Kong

Also, Japanese people is very friendly
日本是我的最喜愛的旅行國家，因為我喜歡任何種類日本貨物，包括壽司，sashimi，衣服，等等

在日本, 我變為購物迷因為在此處的全部貨物都是比香港便宜

此外，日本人非常友好

Japan is my favourite country where I most want to travel to. The main reason is I love everything from Japan. I enjoy Japanese cusines such as sushi and sahimi and I like Japanese fashion too.

As the matter of fact, everything in Japan is cheaper than those in Hongkong. I spend a lot to purchase Japanese goods and I think I become a shopaholic there.

I find out that Japanese people are very friendly. (I appreciate their hospitality so much.)