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Almost 40% of students in our class are female.



almost 40% percent students are girl in our class.
40%之後有加percent??

其實冇乜話大錯gee，不過 are girl 同 in our class 調轉會好D 囉......

正: Almost 40% of the students are girls in our class.



Almost (要大寫)

(% 即是 percentage, 只需用其一)

40% of the students (你漏了of the 二字)

girls 不是 girl , 要加 S, 因有多個人。

我們班近百分之四十的學生是女學

Our class nearly 40% students are female study


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