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今天學校有個旅行,,
today we have our school picnic.
在途中,,
on the way,
我同我兩個朋友傾計,,
i chated with my two friends
到達之後,,
after arrival,
我同我的朋友爬繩網,,
me and my friends climbed a rope network,
玩得好開心,,
we were happy.
過了幾分鐘,,
After a few minutes,
去食BBQ,,
we went to have barbecue,
食了兩粒魚蛋和牛丸,,
ate fish ball and meat ball,
還食了兩條香腸,,
and also two sausagues
食完野之後,,
After eating,
又去爬繩網,,
we climbed the rope network again,
爬了很多次,,
we climbed again and again.
要離開了,,
It's time to leave,
上了旅遊巴,,
we got on the bus
我又同我的朋友傾計,,
and chated with my friends again,
傾得非常開心
we all felt happy.

希望幫到你=]

我非常高興，可為樓主解答疑難。承蒙閣下給予的機會，在下將不負眾望，勇獲最佳奧斯卡的大榮譽。
翻譯工作實不容易，願得大家支持啦！

Today, I take part in the school's trip.
On the way, I have a nice conversation with my two friends.
After arriving, I climb a rope net with my classmates, which I have a joyful time.
After finishing the activity, we have a barbecue.I eat two piece of fish balls and cattle balls and still eat two sausages.
When I finish my lunch, I go to the rope net again.
I'm playing on the rope net for a long time.
As the end of the trip, I give on the coach.
On the way, I have the conversation with my classmates again. I'm very happy in the conversation.

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2007-11-24 17:08:02 補充：
前面很多人不是句子不通，就是Grammar有錯。希望樓主能有明智決定。

今天學校有個旅行,,
We had our school picnic today
在途中,,
on the way to our destination
我同我兩個朋友傾計,,
I was chatting with my two friends
到達之後,,
after we arrived there,
我同我的朋友爬繩網,,
me and my friends went to climb the rope network
玩得好開心,,
we were very happy
過了幾分鐘,,
after a few minutes
去食BBQ,,
we went to have our BBQ
食了兩粒魚蛋和牛丸,,
I ate 2 fishballs and a meatball
還食了兩條香腸,,
I also had two sausages
食完野之後,,
after I ha the meal
又去爬繩網,,
we climbed the rope network again
爬了很多次,,
we climbed a lot of times
要離開了,,
finally, it is the time to go
上了旅遊巴,,
we got on the tourist bus
我又同我的朋友傾計,,
I chatted with my friends again
傾得非常開心.
We were very delighted

I hope I can help u =]

Today the school has a travel, on the way, I with my two friends 傾計, after arrives, I with friend of mine 爬繩 net, play well happy, crossed several minutes, eats BBQ, has eaten two grain of fish eggs and the cow pill, but also has eaten two sausages, after eats wildly, also goes to 爬繩 the net, crawled very many orders, had to leave, on travelled Pakistan, I with friend of mine 傾計, leaned extremely happy

My school hold a picnic today,
I chatted with 2 friends on our way,
When we arrived the destination,
I and my friends climbed the cordage net,
We played happily for several minutes,
then we went for barbecued food.
We ate 2 fish ball & beef ball
and also 2 sausages
When we finished the food
we climbed the cordage net again many times
At the time leaving,
we got on the coach
I chatted to my friends again
We enjoyed it very much.

今天學校有個旅行,, Today the school contain a trip, ,
在途中,, On the way, ,
我同我兩個朋友聊天,, I together I two friends chat, ,
到達之後,, After arriving, ,
我同我的朋友爬繩網,, I climb a rope net with my friend, ,
玩得好開心,, Play very happy, ,
過了幾分鐘,, Led for several minutes, ,
去BBQ,, Go to BBQ, ,
吃了兩粒魚蛋和牛丸,, Ate two grains of fish eggs and cattle pill, ,
還吃了兩條香腸,, Still ate two sausages, ,
吃完之後,, After finishing eating, ,
又去爬繩網,, Climb a rope net again, ,
爬了很多次,, Climbed a lot of time, ,
要離開了,, To leave,
上了旅遊巴,, Ascended a tour Bus, ,
我又同我的朋友聊天,, I chat with my friend again, ,
聊得非常開心. Chat very happy.