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On-Net was found about eight years ago and provided a wide range of IT solution and service to make the business process become easier and smoother. Although, the management of On-net did not have enough capital to embrace the major businesses of weaknesses (完全唔明你呢句想寫乜, 可唔可以寫句中文解釋下, 再幫你改). Also, there are many competitors in the IT market, but the professional IT staff in On-net can provide excellent services to their client and may develop unlimited opportunities in the market.

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market=巿場smoother=弄平的人, 路面平整機, 修光工 professional =n.自由職業者, 專業人員, 職業運動員, 職業藝人adj.專業的, 職業的

On-Net was found about eight years ago and provided a wide range of IT solution and service to make the business process become easier and smoother. Although, the management of On-net did not have enough capital to embrace the major businesses of weaknesses (完全唔明你呢句想寫乜, 可唔可以寫句中文解釋下, 再幫你改). Also, there are many competitors in the IT market, but the professional IT staff in On-net can provide excellent services to their client and may develop unlimited opportunities in the market.