Please let me know the correctness of the following sentence:
We, Sunshine Hotel, are a refreshing high-tech five-star luxury hotel in Tsim Sha Tsui, extending to you, a cordial invitation to participate in the coming Winter Promotion Program.
English, Grammer Problem
2007-11-22 6:52 pm
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2007-11-22 7:21 pm
✔ 最佳答案
Our hotel (Sunshine Hotel) is a refreshing high-tech five star luxury hotel in Tsim Sha Tsui. We cordially invite you to join our Winter Promotion Programme this year.然後提供Winter Promotion Programme嘅詳細資料。(用字以簡單直接及親切有禮為原則，太多comma同relative clauses會好亂。)
2007-11-23 8:47 am
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2007-11-22 6:59 pm
What about:
The Sunshine Hotel, a refreshing high-tech five-star luxury hotel in Tsim Sha Tsui, cordially invites you to participate in the coming Winter Promotion Program.
The Sunshine Hotel, a refreshing high-tech five-star luxury hotel in Tsim Sha Tsui, cordially invites you to participate in the coming Winter Promotion Program.
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