咁樣寫得唔得呀??? 點樣會再好D?? Thanks ~

2007-11-20 10:54 pm
Annie

附件是上一張單據的收條.

跟據你的e mail,我們下星期一不會像慣常地把你的信件寄出,我們會把信件留待你下星期四你到我公司時取走.

謝謝

Dear Annie

Attached please find the receipt of your last payment.

And further to your e-mail, we will not send out the mails to you next Monday as usual. We will keep for your pick up on next Thursday.

Best Regards

我想問咁寫得唔得??? 點樣寫會好d呀??? 唔該大家 ~

回答 (3)

2007-11-20 11:22 pm
✔ 最佳答案
基本上都冇乜問題,
但可以再寫好一些的,
如下:

Dear Annie,

Please find the attached receipt of your last payment.

Accoring to your email, we will not send you the mails on next Monday as we usually do, and we will keep them until you come to our company to pick them up on next Thursday.

Best Regards,

我覺得咁寫就較為通順.
希望幫到你啦~~
參考: myself
2007-11-21 12:15 am
Dear Annie

As per request by you, the usual letters will not send out on next Monday and keep for you to collect on next Thursday.

Please find attached official receipt for your last payment.

Best regards

notes: we use "pick up" for person e.g. we will pick up you at 7:00
use "collect" for things e.g. we have collected the parcel yesterday.
2007-11-21 12:14 am
Dear Annie:

Included in this attachment is a receipt for you most recent transaction.

Follow according to your e-mail , we won't send you the mails next Monday as usual , but we will hold them in our campany for you to pick them up on next Thursday.

Best Regards

^_^ I hope it can help you get batter
參考: me


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