proofreading!! help!

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2007-11-18 6:09 am

In order to become competent winners, children should master the basics firstly.

呢句有咩錯...?? 可唔可以explain...??thx!!

更新1:

firstly should be changed into first. 可唔可以explain more...?

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multipleintelligences88

2007-11-18 6:45 am

✔ 最佳答案

It should be:

children should master the basics first. (not firstly)

first: here means before doing anything

Firstly is an adverb for giving reasons.

for example: Firstly, ....
Secondly, ....

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tweety

2007-11-18 6:38 am

firstly should be changed into first.

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嵐

2007-11-18 6:30 am

competent --> competitive 係adj

.....係你寫的嗎 or bk ge....??

其實唔係太明後句想講d 咩..........

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