有冇英文勁人可以幫我翻譯~~~~

I have a genuine interest in taking sociology or related subjects by which I can apply to help others as well as in my career. Before my HKCEE, I had already set studying sociology as my short term target and so, I chose to take psychology and interpersonal relationship as part of my advanced level studies. I develop genuine zeal and had more in-depth knowledge in sociology after learning these two subjects. Besides, I am articulate and confident from what I known of myself. I have been a musical instrument teacher for two years. I have partook in quite a number of musical shows and these epxeriences builds up my confidence in presentation, teaching as well as endurance. I devote myself to helping others in need and so I enjoy doing voluntary works like flag selling and elderly visitation in my spare time. In all, I am confident that my communication skill, confidence, patience and willing to lend a helping hand to others qualifies me to be one of the candidates for studying sociology. I would be very grateful if I have been given an opportunity to prove my suitability and fortitude in front of challenges.

I continuously all good hoped may read related 'sociological' the subject, the good hope may penetrate this branch to help others.By the five starts, I decided when the path is to the sociology is a goal, to the preparatory course, I read selectively the psychology as well as passes knows the education the interpersonal relationship branch, studies this two branches to make me to have the strong interest regarding the sociology and to have a deeper understanding regarding the sociology.In addition, my all have the very big confidence regarding own power of expression aspect, myself am a musical instrument teacher, some two year teaching experience, also once participated in many times music performance, others ability all had the suitable confidence regarding the expression as well as professor, but I also had the suitable confidence regarding own self-confidence and the patience.I also had once engaged in some voluntary worker's activity, for example: Sells the flag and the visitation elder, regarding helps others sincerely also is craves extremely.Believed my expression, self-confident, the patience and helps human's sincere number aspect, all is conducives toward favor reads sociological the subject.If I have the opportunity, I must be able to prove oneself has ability facing the challenge

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