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I had my party at home, It started at two o’clock, I had my family, my friend and my cousins, I like them very much, In the party, we played a lot of games, First, we play NDS, Next, we play musical chair.Also,I ate a lot in the party such as Chicken wings,
sausages, birthday cake, fish balls, fruit, sandwiches, *milk chocolates and pizzas.They were very very delicious! My friends and my relatives brought me some presents.I was surprised because one of my cousins gave me a PC game,it's my favourite PC game! I was very happy because I could receive many gifts! At last,we took a photo.Finally,my friends and my cousins left happily.

* What is milk chocolates?
Do you mean...
1)chocolate milk shake(巧克力奶昔)
2)chocolate milk(巧克力牛奶)
3)milk chocolate bars(牛奶巧克力塊)

Today I had my great birthday party at home, it was fabulous and fun. The party started at two in the afternoon, all my friends and my cousins came and celebrated my birthday with my family.During the party, we had a great meal, I ate chicken wings, sausages, birthfay cake fish balls, fruit, sandwiches, milk chocolates and pizzas. i was totally bloated. After the meal, we played a lot of games. Firstly, we played my favourite NDS for a while. And we played the musical chair next. We ended the party happily but we were all exhausted.
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Today i had a birthday party. it was fun. It started at two o' clock ．my friend and my cousins was came my birthday party ．In the party ，we played a lot of games ．First ，we play NDS ．Next ，we play musical chair ,,then we ate many of food sach as Chicken wings ........ at 20:00, they went home and my party had finished!