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Therefore, there are two places which I had the most fun. First it is Disneyland.
It's because there are lots of themed areas: American Avenue, Future World, Imaginery World, Mickey Cartoon City, Animal Kingdom, Risk World etc... The roller coasters make me most excited. The best mechanical ride is Buzz Lightyear Astro Blasters, you sit on the speekwalk and shot at diffenent targets, it is very funny.
Spending one day in Disneyland is not enough to finish all the games.
The second one is The Arizona Grand Canyon .There is a glass skywalk which is 1158 meters long. I could only walk on bear foot, it not only takes me to have an aerial view of The Arizona Grand Canyon from midsky. It also takes me to reach the place which only birds could fly up to, and I took a helicopter to look down at the whole Grand Canyon. The veiw of The Grand Canyon in the sky is very grand and exciting.

所以以上的地方,我玩得最開心的地方有兩個,第一是迪士尼樂園,
因為這裏有很多主題樂園：美國大街、未來世界、幻想世界、米奇卡通城、
動物王國、冒險世界等等….還有讓我最興奮的是樂園既過山車
機動遊戲,就是巴斯光年的射擊遊戲, 坐在輸送帶上射擊, very funny,
係迪士尼樂園用一天的時間都玩不完.
其次就是大峽谷那裏有個高達 1158 公尺的玻璃Skywalk, 我只需靠著徒步，不但能帶我從半空中俯瞰亞利桑納州大峽谷，
還能讓我到達只有鳥類才能翱翔的地方,而我都有乘直升飛機瀏覽整個山谷. 在天上觀看大峽谷風景非常壯觀和刺激。
So above place, I play there are 2 in the most happy place, the first is a Disney paradise,
Because here have a lot of topic paradises:American avenue, future world, fantasize the strange cartoon city of the world, rice,
Animal Kingdom, risky world etc. ….Still have already let I the paradise is most excited since lead a mountain car
Mobile game is Ba the gunning game of the Si light year, sit on the belt conveyer to shoot, very funny,
Is a Disney paradise to use a days all play not over.
Is a grand canyon secondly to have to be up to 1158 meter glass Skywalks there, I only need near go on foot, can bring me not only from overlook the state grand canyon of Arizona in out of the sky,
Can also let me arrive to only have birds talent the place of the hover, and I have already ridden to keep rising the airplane browse the whole valley.The taking a look at in the sky grand canyon scenery is in the skyvery magnificent and stimulates.

Therefore, upon the places above, the two places I have most fun of, 1st is Disneyland. It is because there are lots of theme park: American Avenue, Future World, Imaginery World, Mickey Cartoon City, Animal Kingdom, Risk World etc... The one makes me most excited is the Buzlightyear shooting game, which is a roller coaster. Sit on the speekwalk and shot is quite fun. Even spend a day in Disneyland is still not enough. The 2nd is Grand Canyon. It has a skywalk which reaches the 1158 meters glass for it. I only need to hike, and could take me to have an aerial view of the Arizona Grand Canyon from midsky. It also take me to reach the place which only birds could fly up to, and I take helicopter to look down at the whole grand canyon. Viewing the Grand Canyon in the sky is very spectacular and excited.


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所以以上的地方,我玩得最開心的地方有兩個,第一是迪士尼樂園,
因為這裏有很多主題樂園：美國大街、未來世界、幻想世界、米奇卡通城、
動物王國、冒險世界等等….還有讓我最興奮的是樂園既過山車
機動遊戲,就是巴斯光年的射擊遊戲, 坐在輸送帶上射擊, very funny,
係迪士尼樂園用一天的時間都玩不完.
其次就是大峽谷那裏有個高達 1158 公尺的玻璃Skywalk, 我只需靠著徒步，不但能帶我從半空中俯瞰亞利桑納州大峽谷，
還能讓我到達只有鳥類才能翱翔的地方,而我都有乘直升飛機瀏覽整個山谷. 在天上觀看大峽谷風景非常壯觀和刺激。
Therefore above place, I play the happiest place to have two, first enlightens the gentleman Nepal paradise, because here has the very many theme park: American avenue, future world, fantasy world, rice wonderful cartoon city, animal kingdom, risk world and so on….Also has lets me excitedly is the paradise already roller coaster mobile game, is the Buss light year fire game, sits fire on the conveyor belt, very funny, is enlightens the gentleman Nepal paradise not to be able to play with day. Next is Grand Canyon there has to reach as high as 1158 meter glass Skywalk, I only must close right up against on foot, not only can lead me from the midair bird's eye view Asia advantage Sang Nazhou the Grand Canyon, but also can let me arrive the place which only then the birds can hover, but I all have while the helicopter browsing entire mountain valley. Watches the Grand Canyon scenery unusual magnificent sight and the stimulation in the space