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Right now, let us turn to ( 談一下 ) the sightseeing itinerary . It will be a "4-day or 5-day " tour. On the first day, we will go to The Peak because it is the place which visitors should visit. The Peak that is situated on Hong Kong Island reaches 554 meters above sea . Just looking ahead ( 向前望 ) or looking down (向下望) there, you can see the beautiful scene of Hong Kong Island, Victoria Harbour and Kowloon Peninsula . That is the best place to view the " The Pearl of Orient ".

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Right, let's take a look to the itinerary of our sightseeing tour, and that will be a three-day tour or a five-day tour. On the first day, we will go to visit The Peak because this is a famous place in Hong Kong.

The Peak is located on the Hong Kong Island and it is 554 meters tall. You can see nearly the whole Hong Kong Island, Victoria Harbour and Kowloon Peninsula from there. So The Peak is a great place to view "The Pearl of Orient".

Let us now take a look at the sightseeing tour's itinerary. It will be a three day to five day tour aroung Hong Kong. The first attraction on our schedule has to be The Peak. It is one of the "must go" places if it is your first time to visit Hong Kong. It is situated in Hong Kong Island and the view you get from there is the completely opposite to the busy city view of all the tall buildings. It is infact the best spot to get a overall view of Hong Kong because The Peak is five hundred and fifty four meters high. The view which you will get totally covers other attractions such as the Kowloon Peninsula, Victoria habour,the whole of Hong Kong Island and much much more. There is also a shopping centre at the Peak which is a bonus reason why to visit!

Right , let's turn our attention to the sightseeing tour's itnerary. And that will be a three day tour or five day tour. On the first day , we will go to the Peak .This is because this is the famous place where tourist usually go. The Peak is located on Hong Kong Island.The Peak's top is 554 m high and great sights where you can see from the Peak.You may also see the whole Hong Kong Island , Victoria harbour and Kowloon Peninsula. That is a great place to view the 'Pearl of Orient'.

Right, let's have a look to the itinerary of the sightseeing tour. It will be a 3-day or 5-day tour. On the 1st day, we will go to The Peak. It is the most poplular attractions in HK that we should not missing. The Peak is locating on the HK Island with height of 554meters.
It is absolutely incredible! Looking down from the Peak, you will be amazing by the spectacular view of the surrounding city skyline, the world-famous Victoria Habour and Kwoloon, towering skyscrapers and peaceful green hillsides. It is a good place to show "the Best of East".