How Globalization Affects Your Daily Life? 請指出錯誤!!

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It spreads nearly every country, even poor country(s) like India, Philippines, Nepal, and so. It has a far-researching result, so every body's mind has this concept. I (go) to McDonalds at least twice a week and many children love McDonalds(') Happy Meal too.

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On the other hand, cafe restaurant is (a) Hong Kong-featured eating culture, but you can find it popular and fabulous in China Towns in Western countries, like UK, USA, Australia, and even Southeastern Asia. A lot of tourists travel (to) Hong Kong to eat special food in café restaurant(s).

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In this state of global disorder(,) it has become brutally clear that the world is interconnected through a complex web of transnational networks. Global interconnectedness is also what demarcates the Internet, regardless of physical proximity. Generally (it is) defined as the network of networks, the Internet can help us understand the world we live in, a world in which the growing significance of boundary-crossing networks is forcing us to reconfigure our societies as interdependent parts of a global whole.

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I have a friend in England, and we always chat and see each other through internet. Without respect to where your friends are, they (still) seem to (be) around you.

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For instance, SARS quickly spread across globally in 2003, (which) a lot of people, including different countries, died(, s)uch as America, Canada, Taiwan, China, even in Hong Kong. Every one of us is involved.