My name is Katie,I live in fanling.I have one mather,one bother and one sister.My sister is older that me.I'm ten year old.My sister is thirteen year old.My hobby is swimming.
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2007-11-08 4:36 am
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2007-11-08 4:45 am
✔ 最佳答案
如果是十歲的作文英文水平已經算不錯
基本文化準確
但有小部分的串字問題（如 mother）
其他大概可以
然而
因為這段文字較為常見
而且表達較為簡單
如果是年紀較大的學生的話
便未能看到是否有足夠的表達能力了
總括而言
是平穩的英文水平
如要有更準確的評價
需有更長的段落或更多資料
參考: 我是中學教師
2007-11-09 3:00 am
my name is katie, i live in fanling. i have A mother, A brother and A thirteen-year-old sister, who is three years older than i am. my hobby is swimming. i'm studying in ?? school and i'm in what class.
you can add some more things like your friends, your favorite food, when is your birthday, your school, etc.
you can add some more things like your friends, your favorite food, when is your birthday, your school, etc.
2007-11-08 8:03 am
十歲的水平，真的不錯!
但我有少少意見給你，這些都不是大錯，但絕對可以避免。
1 人名，地名首個字母應用大階。
2 mother or father 大家都會有一個，無論英文或中文，都不用說「我有一個母親」
3 thirteen 是多於一，所以應該係 thirteen years old.
請努力加油，說實的，十歲真的不錯!
但我有少少意見給你，這些都不是大錯，但絕對可以避免。
1 人名，地名首個字母應用大階。
2 mother or father 大家都會有一個，無論英文或中文，都不用說「我有一個母親」
3 thirteen 是多於一，所以應該係 thirteen years old.
請努力加油，說實的，十歲真的不錯!
參考: sweetie
2007-11-08 4:54 am
你有些錯了～
Best:
My name is Katie I live in Fanling. I have one mother, one bother and one sister. My sister is older than me. I'm ten years old. My sister is thirteen years old. My hobby is swimming.
Ｉdon’t know紛嶺’s English. You have to found that your self.
紛嶺普通話拼音：Fen Ling
Best:
My name is Katie I live in Fanling. I have one mother, one bother and one sister. My sister is older than me. I'm ten years old. My sister is thirteen years old. My hobby is swimming.
Ｉdon’t know紛嶺’s English. You have to found that your self.
紛嶺普通話拼音：Fen Ling
參考: Me
2007-11-08 4:50 am
有少少錯左....
My name is Katie, I live in Fanling. I have mother, brother and sister.My sister is older than me. I'm ten-year-old ( ten years old ) and my sister is thirteen-year-old ( thirteen years old ). ( you can talk more about your brother too. )My hobby is swimming.
純屬個人意見, 只供參考~ ^^
My name is Katie, I live in Fanling. I have mother, brother and sister.My sister is older than me. I'm ten-year-old ( ten years old ) and my sister is thirteen-year-old ( thirteen years old ). ( you can talk more about your brother too. )My hobby is swimming.
純屬個人意見, 只供參考~ ^^
參考: myself
2007-11-08 4:46 am
one mather (可no one)
thirteen??? (是多少??什麼來的??串錯字??而且你是10,你sister is (teen)??)
thirteen??? (是多少??什麼來的??串錯字??而且你是10,你sister is (teen)??)
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