Hi May, When I first came to China, I was very happy that someone was coming to meet me at the airport. I'm sure Joe is, too. You were very descriptive with your letter and that's very important in situations like these. Good job. However, I would like you to improve yourself in a few aspects. Try to be consistent in your verb tenses (arrived - arrive). I also changed a few words to give the sentence a better meaning. Keep studying and remember: practice makes perfect. Good luck.