想大家指正這英文句子的錯處

錯處很多, 講唔哂, 例:
meet many baffle(battle)
during learning
I always go to run 等等, 非正宗英文. 跟據中文解釋, 英文番譯如下:
即使在學習上遇到困難,我也不會放稟
1.even if i meet many baffle during learning, I will not give up.
I wouldn't give up even I face the utmost difficulty of lessons.
今天我跑了去寶林,用了我50分鐘,每當我感到不開心時,我總是會去跑步
2.today, I ran to po lam, it take me 50 minute, when I felt unhappy...I alway go to run.
I went to Po-Lam today by using 50 minutes, I'll go for jogging each time I was in bad mood.

１　一開頭ｅｖｅｎ要大階！ｔｈｅｎ　ｂａｆｆｌｅ有ｓ，因為前面係ｍａｎｙ！

２　ｔｏｄａｙ呢ｄ喺英文入面好少擺前面，Ｐｏ　Ｌａｍ係地方，要大階，用ｔｏｏｋ，因為過去式，用ｍｉｎｕｔｅｓ，因為多過一分鐘，用ｆｅｅｌ，因為係每次感到！ａｌｗａｙｓ係有ｓ　ｇｅ！

成句係
I ran to Po Lam today, it took me 50 minutes, when I fe unhappy...I always go to run.


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