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Last Friday was our school 's Picnic Day.On last Thursday,I went to supermarket to buy some food for picnic with my classmate after school.We bought a lot of things.For example, chips, cake, chicken wings.
We were all very happy on that day.It is because we had waited for a long time.When we arrived at the park,we firstly played some games that need to work in a group.Then, we ate some food that we had bought.But the most unforgetable thing is I could eat delicious sandwiches which were made by Mary.She cooked very well.
After that,we went hiking together.Although it is uncomfortable,but I still feel happy.It is because I have a lot of best friends.

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Friday is the trip of school, , at travelling ground of the first 1 day, , I and the classmates the after school is supermarket to buy travelling food, ,
Did we buy a lot of foods!!There is Shu slice, , small cake and chicken wing etc., ,
All finally went to a trip, , are we very happy!!After going to suburb park, , we play some Xi body together first game, , eat some thing after!!Making me surpriseding most is pleased, , is can eat the mary personally does of three texts cured, , she of is the cooking also good!!
After finishing eating thing, , we still go mountain path together, , although is very hard, , do I also feel very happy!!Because I have a class of good good friend!!