20分-這句英文有甚麼問題?Enclosed herewith the above styles nos

如果沒有誤會你的意思, 我會這樣寫:

1. Salesman sample of rose pins with style numbers mentioned above is enclosed herewith.
隨信附寄上述型號的玫瑰飾針的銷售員樣本.

2. Enclosed are rose pins with style numbers mentioned above for salesman sample.
附奉上述型號的玫瑰飾針以作銷售員樣本之用.

其實用 [for the use of saleman sample] 也正確, 但有點累贅. 我覺得用 [for salesman sample] 已可表明意思了.

Sample rose pins in the style mentioned above are enclosed.

問題如下:

全句句子欠動詞
the above styles是不適當，above 不可作形容詞
什麼是nos?
for saleman sample used也錯了
全句可改為:
Enclosed are the nos rose pins mentioned above for the purposes of salesmen's samples.

2007-10-30 12:00:21 補充：
我是指用above style在這裡連同rose pins一起用不太恰當，above當然可作形容詞用。

2007-10-30 16:42:07 補充：
如果nos解numbers (不過冇人咁用，至少係有個full stop: Nos.)，全句可寫成:Enclosed are the rose pins mentioned above for the purposes of salesmen's samples.orThe rose pins mentioned above are enclosed for the purposes of salesmen's samples.

2007-11-01 11:49:39 補充：
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