(急改 , 比20 分)可唔可以幫我改文呀?(2)

2007-10-28 11:52 pm
lee 篇文係 past tense , 可吾可以幫我睇有冇 Grammer mistake and 睇睇有冇漏
s/es 等等,仲有可唔可以幫我譯番D不識既中文詞語變英文詞語呀 ? ,吾通順既句
子∕次序 can 轉下 or delete (verbs 要Form 1用既) Thanks!
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When I was 7 to 8 .......
I was(升上) primary school, my school was near my home. When I was first time
went to my school, (發生了一件小事) .
更新1:

(續上) (當時)my neighbour went to school with me. Suddenly, she said who can ran to school faster, that who was the winner. I thought I must be the winner. So I ran and ran, but I (摔倒了) . My glasses was broken and my nose was (損左). It was so funny.

更新2:

(續上) At that time, there are many many first time on there. The first time been the monitress The first time been the second in the class of test The first time went to the school library ...............

回答 (2)

2007-10-28 11:59 pm
✔ 最佳答案
Once upon a time ,my neighbour went to school with me. Suddenly, she said who can ran to school faster, that who was the winner. I thought I must be the winner. So I ran and ran, but I fell down.My glasses was broken.I think it was so funny !
2007-10-30 2:44 am
i think good too


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