proof reading 一句改錯處.請幫幫我

I have told her hundreds of times not to disturb me while I am doing my homework , but she never listens.

I (have told) her hundreds of times not to disturb me while I'm (doing) my homework but she never (listens).

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我用present 及 present perfect tense 來表示這些事情在目前還有發生,所以不用past tense.

情況就像在向父母投訴那個女子(例如小妹妹)很頑皮

其他人用listen不用listens是錯的,因為是在she後面.

I have told her hundreds of times not to disturb me when I was doing my homework but she had never listened.

你打錯好多野

1)proof reading → proofreading (我估你打錯)
2)am told(被告訴) → have told(已經告訴)
因為這裡要用現在完成式,不是被動式
3)ding → doing (我估你打錯)

2007-10-27 13:05:24 補充：
PS.2) have told(已經告訴)會好過用told

I told her hundred times that do not disturb me when I am doing my homework. However, she never listen to me.