Form 4 English - Proofreading

Women _tend_ to lose weight at a slower rate than men, but don't let this discourage you. Women simply __ store__ fat more efficiently than men because it __is needed__ during and after pregnancy. As your body fat level __is reduced__ , you _would notice_ that the fat is lost in the reverse order of how it _is put_ on. So the most recent fat gains _comes_ off first, while the old fat that _was_ there for a while _took_ the longest to lose.

So the changes I made:

1) tends
2) store
3) is needed
4)is reduced
5)no change
6)no change
7)comes
8)no change
9) no change