Help Me!I need to do the writting about Summer holiday.緊急!!!

I had a great summer holiday this year, I enjoyed it very much. I went an oversea trip to Japan, it was wounderful. I went to Disneyland and played for the whole day. Althought I was exhausted, I still went to night shopping. I thought I am an enthusiastic boy/girl. I took a lot of beautiful photos and printed some of them after I came back Hong Kong.