grammer 有冇錯?

正確的文法應為:
1.Oh! His best friend died on the Earth when Superbird came to the Earth in first time.
3.On the other hand, I thought the author was brilliant in writing skill. I was suprised that Mary, the main character, was not a human. The author fantastically used another side to write some particular mankind. It was interesting.

1.Oh! His best friend was died on Earth when Superbird went to Earth at first time.

Oh! His best friend died on Earth when Superbird went to Earth the first time.
or
It was the first time Superbird went to Earth. His best friend died there.


2.Captain Lake wanted to retaliate.However,he was caught by human being.
ok

3.In another hand,I thought the auther did really well in writing skill.I was surprised that the main character,Mary,wasn't a mankind.It was fantastic that the auther use another side to write some particular of mankind.It was interesting.

On the other hand, I think the author has good writing skill. I was surprised that the main character, Mary, was not mankind. It was fantastic that the author uses Mary to reflect other side of mankind character. It was interesting.

冇錯Grammer,不過串錯咗字.應該係"author"唔係"auther".