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Let me tell you (how) the story happened. Twenty years ago, (Superbird the spaceship), visited the Earth (for the) first time. It crashed into a hill in the middle of a desert. Unfortunately, there were five (spaceship members) died and (Mary was the only one who survived in the accident.) (After the crash, a human being on Earth was chasing after Mary and wanted to catch her.) (Mary ran and ran away) towards a house. (In the house, Mary met a friend named Jane.) (In the end,) the human being helped Mary to (return to) her home.

Let me tell you what the story happened. Twenty years ago, Superbird, which was a spaceship, went to the earth at the first time. It crashed into a hill in the middle of a desert. Unfortunately, five people died and Mary was the only survivor. Then, the human beings on the earth were going to catch Mary. She ran and ran. Finally, she went to a house. She met a friend, Jane, in the house. After that, the human beings helped Mary to go back her home.