I think ABC school is a special and quality school. It is big and the teachers are nice. The subjects are novel for me. The equipment are sufficient and that makes me have lots of fun in my schoolife . I think the learning atmosphere is delight that makes me learnt lots of things.
大家幫我睇下呢段文有冇D咩grammer mistake又或者點樣可以改得好D, 唔該
英文grammer一問
2007-10-22 1:38 am
回答 (6)
2007-10-22 1:49 am
✔ 最佳答案
atmosphere改做climatelearnt改做learn
delight 改做delighting
2007-10-21 17:49:52 補充：
delight 改做delightful
2007-10-22 1:49 am
I think ABC school is a special and quality school. It is big and the teachers are nice. The subjects are novel for me. The equipment is sufficient and that makes me have lots of fun in my schoolife . I think the learning atmosphere is delight that makes me learnt lots of things.
EQUIPMENT IS......
EQUIPMENT IS......
2007-10-22 1:45 am
2007-10-22 1:45 am
可以將THINK 改另一D生字如ADMIRE, 有欣賞的意思
BIG改HUGE
NICE改GREAT(唔改都OK)
仲有, 知唔知道幾時用WHICH (指名)幾時用THAT (非指名) ?
如果清楚可以改埋
BIG改HUGE
NICE改GREAT(唔改都OK)
仲有, 知唔知道幾時用WHICH (指名)幾時用THAT (非指名) ?
如果清楚可以改埋
參考: 自己
2007-10-22 1:42 am
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