英文grammer一問

2007-10-22 1:38 am

I think ABC school is a special and quality school. It is big and the teachers are nice. The subjects are novel for me. The equipment are sufficient and that makes me have lots of fun in my schoolife . I think the learning atmosphere is delight that makes me learnt lots of things.
大家幫我睇下呢段文有冇D咩grammer mistake又或者點樣可以改得好D, 唔該

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用戶127983

2007-10-22 1:49 am

✔ 最佳答案

atmosphere改做climate

learnt改做learn

delight 改做delighting

2007-10-21 17:49:52 補充：
delight 改做delightful

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Winky

2007-10-22 1:49 am

I think ABC school is a special and quality school. It is big and the teachers are nice. The subjects are novel for me. The equipment is sufficient and that makes me have lots of fun in my schoolife . I think the learning atmosphere is delight that makes me learnt lots of things.

EQUIPMENT IS......

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