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Must once, I with friend of mine in a sand beach a Midautumn Festival, but my mysterious experience, is performs in this evening. In the evening our 8 o'clock is going to a sand beach, that very evening moon to be very big, the world star very is also easy to see, we then very satisfiedly appreciate the moon under the sand beach and in bake on the table to bake. Plays in us to evening past 3 o'clock, I see an elephant werewolf the person, but very quick has vanished, I asked the friend of mine does have saw, the friends of mine all said blind, my then gallbladder thickly thickly has a look to have any matter. After I leave, the sky moon has been prevented by the space cloud, suddenly, I saw to a corpse, the body very good elephant is nipped by the wolf is same, I am frightened by him the scream. The friend of mine hears my cry to run immediately goes forward, they then immediately the call police, the police then call on us the police bureau to go, after we give the material which we knew, then goes home, but recollected, is I saw the werewolf does, is unknown.

Once, i went to the beach with my friends at Mid-Autumn Festival. Here Was the place that my fanstastic experience happened!
we went to the beach at eight o'clock. The moon was big and the stars were clear. We sit down to enjoy the wonderful moonlight. We had a barbecue and played until 3o'clock midnight . i saw a man that looked like a wolfman but he disappeared at once. I asked my friends did they saw him. My friends replied that they havn't. I bravely went to see what happen .
When i left myself only, the moon gave the clouds block. Suddenly, i saw a corpse!! The dead body that looked like give bite. I am scred and scremed ! My friends came to see what happen then called the police. The policeman asked us to go to the police office. After we gave the information that we know, we backed home. I thought, ' is the wolfman that i have seen before do that ?' No answer.....




My english is not that good...=V="

I remember once, My friend and I had a Mid-Autumn Festival on the beach, but i memorized that it was a night.

We arrived the beach at 8. The moon at that time was very big, the stars in the sky can be easily seen, we felt satisfied when we were looking at the moon and having barbecue on the table. We played until 3am, we saw a man like a wolf, but he disapear at once. I ask my friend whether did they saw that, they said they didn't see it. I was courageous and went to see what happens.

After I have left, the cloud covered the moon and I saw a dead people. I thought that he was ate by the wolf, I screemed!!! My friend heard that and came. They called the police immediately. And we followed the police to the police station. We gave our imformation. Then we backed home. Is it done by the wolf??? Nobody knows.

2007-10-21 16:19:28 補充：
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One time, I with friend of mine in a sand beach a Midautumn Festival, but my mysterious experience, is performs in this evening.
Late our 8 o'clock is going to a sand beach, that very evening moon to be very big, the world star very is also easy to see, we then very satisfiedly appreciate the moon under the sand beach and in bake on the table to bake. Plays in us to evening past 3 o'clock, I see an elephant werewolf the person, but very quick has vanished, I asked the friend of mine does have saw, the friends of mine all said blind, my then gallbladder thickly thickly has a look to have any matter.
After I leave, the sky moon has been prevented by the space cloud, suddenly, I saw to a corpse, the body very good elephant is nipped by the wolf is same, I am frightened by him the scream. The friend of mine hears my cry to run immediately goes forward, they then immediately the call police, the police then call on us the police bureau to go, after we give the material which we knew, then goes home, but recollected, is I saw the werewolf does, is unknown.