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Topic: My Summer Vacation
It's a hot summer and a good time for vacation. I want to go swimming and fishing with my dad. It will be great for me to go hiking and have a fresh breath.
I hope to have skating in the sidewalk all day long, and I like to go to the beach and get some beautiful seashells.
These are what I have planned for my summer vacation.

My summer vacation

It's a hot summer and it's time for vacations.
I would like to go swimming and fishing with my dad.
I would like to go to the mountains and enjoy the fresh air.
I would like to skate in the sidewalk all day.
I would like to go to the beach and collect some beautiful seashells.
This is my plan for my summer vacations.

My summer vacation.
This is time for summer vacation since it is hot.
I would like to go to swim and catch fish with my dad.
I would like to go to the mountains for some fresh air.
I would like to skate in the sidewalk all day.
I would like to go to the beach and pick up some beautiful seashells.
This is my plan for my summer vacation.

My Summer vacation
It is a hot Summer and time for vacation.
I would like to go swimming with my dad and catching fishes.
I would like to go breathing fresh air in the mountains.
I would like to skate in the sidewalk all day long.
I would like to find some beautiful seashells in the beach.
These are my plans in the Summer vacation.

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