急for help

2007-10-19 10:27 pm
改正錯誤!Grammar or word

Suddenly, there was a big shaking on the floor. There was a massive crack on the floor. Some if the cars got stuck.

I was too tired that I stopped the car by the road and bought a can of Nestle coffee from a vending machine beside a corner shop.

Suddenly, awheel of my car broke.

... when I can back, the little dog was back to conscious.


4題!快!thx!

回答 (2)

2007-10-19 11:17 pm
✔ 最佳答案
Suddenly, there was a big shaking on the floor. There was a massive crack on the floor. Some of the cars got stuck on the ground.

I was so tired than I stopped the car by the road and bought a can of Nestle coffee from a vending machine beside a corner shop.

Suddenly, a wheel of my car come off.

After a few minutes when I came back, a little dog was back to conscious.

2007-10-19 15:19:21 補充:
in front on the seconde sentence - there was a massive...put , and there was a massive....
2007-10-19 11:16 pm
第三同第四我識
3.Suddenly, awheel of my car broke
3.Suddenly, awheel of my car brake

4... when I can back, the little dog was back to conscious
4.... when I can back, the little dog will back to conscious
參考: 好似系


收錄日期: 2021-04-13 16:22:56
原文連結 [永久失效]:
https://hk.answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=20071019000051KK02218

檢視 Wayback Machine 備份