修改和翻譯一句英文句子

修改:
He said that Linda always goes to school by bus.
１．呢句係 reported speech。reported speech 雖然係覆述人地講o既o野（即係 past），但如果o個句o野其實係未發生o既事或常規／經常發生，就會用 future / present simple 講。
本句講 linda o既習慣，應用 simple present，唔應該因為用 reported speech 改為 past / 因為有 already 而改用 present perfect。即係冇錯。

翻譯:
As I faced the giant wall, I noticed a child standing next to me in even greater awe of the towering selection of footwear.
as 好多時都係作「因為」解，但亦可以作「當．．．o既時候」解，正如呢句。譯文如下：
當我面向那幅大牆之時，我察覺一個小孩子站在我的身旁，望著面前目不暇給的鞋子款式，比我更感驚愕。

　He said that Linda always goes to school by bus係沒問題的．．．一定岩，沒可能係ａｌｗａｙｓ　ｗｅｎｔ　，係因為　你係話ａｌｗａｙｓ，姐係平時啦，係沒可能會ｗｅｎｔ．．ｓａｉｄ　可以＋上　ｇｏ　係因為只不個係話果個人之前話，但話的Ｌｉｎｄａ做的係慣常做的野做係ｐｒｅｓｅｎｔ　ｔｅｎｓｅ．．ｓｏ　　ｅ係一定岩．
　ｅ個要翻譯的野好像係錯ｗｏ　＝＝．．ｅ到話我向住巨人牆＜＜如果話長城係ｇｒｅａｔ　ｗａｌｌ＞＞,發現一個小朋友係我附近,他的氣勢仲強個高聳的被選拔的鞋類．
　
　　　

He said that Linda always goes to school by bus.個tense错
修改為:用過去式的話:he said that Linda always went to school by bus.
用現在式的話:he say that Linda always goes to school by bus.

１．沒問題
２．因為我面對巨大牆，我注意到一個孩子在靴的高的選擇的更巨大的敬畏裡緊挨著我站。

修改為
He said that Linda always went to school by bus.

2007-10-17 20:50:53 補充：
翻譯為:(網上翻譯)當我面對著巨大的圍牆，我留意到一個孩子站在我旁邊，在更大的敬畏，高聳的選擇鞋類。

He said that Linda always goes to school by bus
以上一句我覺得應該係went to school先岩

As I faced the giant wall, I noticed a child standing next to me in even greater awe of the towering selection of footwear.
因為我面對了巨型牆壁, 我注意孩子站立在我旁邊在鞋類的參天的選擇的更加巨大的敬畏。 <--上網翻譯,唔一定岩