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This is a bag, which is my sister bought me when I was seven years old. She was bought it in Kowloon Tong by fifty dollars. The bag is in red and whity color, and printed with a very funny pattern. I am going to use this bag in the sport day. This bag can carry a lot of foods and stuffs ,so that I think this bag is very special because this is my birthday gift.

2007-10-14 22:39:40 補充：
correction:She bought it in Kowloon Tong by fifty dollars. The bag is red and whity in color, and printed with a very funny pattern.

This is a bag
in I 7 year-old birthday, the elder sister buys for mine
she this bag which buys in
9 Long Tang is 50 Yuan
this bag colors is red and is white, with a very interesting doll
I can in sports day time may put very many
foods with this bag this bag, with very many things
therefore I thought because this
is very specially my birthday gift

This is a bag I ７ year marquis, sister sister buies to me she ９ dragon sugar this bag bought is ５ ０ the color of this first bag is red and white, with a very interesting public son my meeting ｓ ｐ ｏ ｒ ｔ ｓ 　 ｄ ａ ｙ the food that marquis can put with this this bag bag a lot, and many things so I feel that is my birthday gift very especially because of this

This is a bag
Which is given by my sister when I was seven
She bought the bag in Kowloon Tong
This bag is $50
The colour of this bag is red and white,there is a lovely cartoon too.
I use the bag in the Sports day
I can put a lot of food and things inside
I think it is a special birthday gift

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this is a bag , which was bought by my elder sister when i was seven . She bought it in Kowloon Bay . It was fifty dollars at price .
The bag is red and white in colors, also there is a funny / cute cartoon on the bag.
I will use it during Sports Day since this bag can carry a lot of food and stuff .
To be concluded , i do think that the bag is really special . (it has a meaningful reason behind as it was my birthday present given by my elder sisiter)

2007-10-14 23:04:36 補充：
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this is a bag
my sister buy to me when i am 7 years old
she buys it in Kowloon Tong
the bag is 50 dollas
the bag is red and white,there have a very cute doll on the bag
i will use this bag in sporys day
i can put many things in it
so i think it is very specially
because this is my birthday present