English writing 2

If you had a special power, what would you choose?

I would choose the power which can control the time. It is because I have many regrets in my life. If I could control the time, I would back to the past and correct the mistakes made by human. Maybe, I could be the hero who stops the world war! Also, I could have more time to understand the world and read the books which only can be found in the past.

The most amazing thing is that I could go to the future and see how the future is like. I really want to know if the Apocalypse is true.

your grammer and usage are quite good~work hard~

如果你能有特別權力，你能選擇什麼？

我將選擇能控制時間的權力。 因為我在我的生活過程中有很多歉意。 如果我能控制時間，我將對過去回來並且改正人犯的錯誤。 或許，我可能是停止世界大戰的英雄﹗ 此外，我能有更多的時間理解世界並且讀只過去可能被發現的那些書。

如果你有一種特別既能力, 你會選擇咩呢??

我會選擇果科能力係控制時間. 因為我有好多後悔既事係我人生當中. 如果我可以控制時間, 我會返番去之前同改變人類之前既錯誤. 這樣我可能會係停止世界戰爭既勇士. 還有, 我可以有更多既時黎明白呢個世界同睇更多依家已經失去既書.
最驚訝既事係我可以去將來同知道將來會係點. 我真係好想知道 世界係咪真係會未日