唔該幫幫手改吓d Gammer

I wake up at six every day. I wash my face and brush my teeth after I wake up. Then I help my mum with (=to do) the housework. After that, I spend one hour to read some English newspaper. About seven thirty, I eat my breakfast and dress up my school uniform and go to school. After school, I do (all←要唔要都得) my homework and take a bath(shower). Then I help my mum to prepare the dinner. After dinner, I ususally watch TV with my parents.Then, we (all←要唔要都得) sleep at ten o'clock.

2007-10-14 21:47:32 補充：
sorry牙~~every day應該係everyday(好似樓下果位咁講...)十萬個對不起!!! 口

Every day 可以連在一起 (Everyday)
I ususally watching TV with my parents 嗰 watching 須變成 watch
Very good! Keep going!★★★★★

2007-10-14 01:38:46 補充：
唔該幫幫手改吓d Gammer 嗰 Gammer should be GrammerGammer 解作鄉下老太婆 -_- #

Every day, I wake up at six. I wash my face and brush my teeth. I help my mum to do the housework. Then, I spend one hour to read English newspaper. Around seven- thirty, I eat breakfast and dress up my school uniform to go to school. After school, I finish all my homework and take a bath first .Then, I help my mum to prepare dinner. After the meal, I ususally watching TV with my parents. We all sleep at ten o'clock.
Good

watching 轉為 watch