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請高手幫忙改文法！

BO BO

2007-10-14 3:03 am

In the life insurance, everyone can choose the different plans for you, depends on your personal needs. Everyone's identities are all inconsistent, so we will give you the choice of different price. Probably some people will choose to provide thousand dollars for monthly, or probably several dollars(數十元) for monthly. Moreover, our company also will have some subsidy to give all of employee, 20% on the life insurance policy.

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這是商業英語，假設公司要發memo比員工．． opening係未應該咁寫？夠直接嗎？字眼合適嗎？請幫我改改～

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sorry..this is body, not opening~

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用戶207922

2007-10-14 5:53 am

✔ 最佳答案

For internal circulation only

To all staff

The Company provides a range of life insurance plans to suit your personal needs. We provide flexible premium payment schemes ranging from a miminum of [$50} to a few thousand dollars a month. You will also be entitled to enjoy 20% off the premim price of any life insurance policy.

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