Teach me English la. Mark my writing.

Dear diary, // who are u writing a letter to..? Little bit obscure to say dear diary!

What an unfortunate day today! At first, I went to school joyfully as usual. As soon as the lesson had started, everything changed.

My first lesson was English. At the beginning of the lesson Miss Honey acknowledged us that there was a student who failed the last dictation. You know I am poor in English, so I was pretty certain that it was me even before Miss Honey handed out the paper. And finally, not to be surprised it was me.

After I got my result I wanted to cry. However, I held my tear because I didn't want my classmates to be aware of my depressing result and sympathizd me. It wasn't purely my result which made me want to cry, but the fact that I had already spent 8 hours revising on the dictation which was disappointing.

I even spelled the words that she didn't teach. All I got left was the poor result which hurt me a lot.
Is the world fair? A little girl who strived for her target but achieved nothing in the end. I am really tired now. Will I be happy again after a sleep?

Regards,

Wa


--> Don't be so depressed after just a small test or dictation. Learning english is different from other subjects. You need to read more books (novel recommanded) to build up a good foundation. Also advise you to watch more English TV channel.

Dear diary,
Today really was a bad day. At first, I went to school joyfully (as) usual. However when the lessons started, all the things changed.
補充時間：2007-10-12 17:07:43


The first lesson was English and you know I was poor in English. At the beginning, Miss Honey told us the result of the last dictation and said that there was a student failed. I knew that was me even before she distributed the paper back to us.
補充時間：2007-10-12 17:08:13


When I got the result, I wanted to cry but I didn’t do it because I didn’t want my classmatesto know of my poor result and sympathy (pity) me. I wanted to cry not only just for the result but it should not be right after I spent 8 hours to do the revision.
補充時間：2007-10-12 17:08:49


I even spelt everywords that she did not teach. Hoever, what I got was a poor result which hurt me a lot.
Is it a fair world? A little girl trying her best to achieve something but at the end got nothing. I am really tired now. Will I be happy again after some sleep?
Wa