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During the 6-day Beijing trip, I had a lot of chats, valuable exchanges and experience-sharing in some respects like schools, families and culture with overseas Chinese. Therefore, I have developed my communication and interpersonal skills .
I was honoured to participate in the show with our school performers in front of four thousand overseas Chinese . After the performance, I have learnt more about the importance of team work and the power of convergence .

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During the 6-day Beijing trip, I chatted with many overseas Chinese. I exchanged and shared my opinions and experience about schools, families, even the culture with them. I developed strong interpersonal skills.
Our school was honored as we performed in front of four thousand overseas Chinese. I was one of the performers. During the process of participating in the performance as a team, I learned the importance of team spirit and experienced a feeling of unity.

During the six-day Beijing trip, I have chatted with overseas Chinese, exchanged many opinions and experience about schools, families, and even culture. I have developed the ability of interpersonal skills.
I was one of the performers of the show performed by our school in front of four thousand overseas Chinese. I have learnt the importance of team-working skills and felt the power of cohesion.