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2007-10-10 9:32 am
After our discussion, both of us agree to purchase one desktop computer, one scanner, and one database software. Then, we are also required to write a proposal on what should be purchased for our college principal's approval.
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2007-10-11 1:12 am
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After much discussion( 經詳細討論後), both of us have agreed to purchase one set each of desktop computer, scanner and database software . However, we are required to submit (我們需要呈交) a proposal concerning the purchace of computer equipment to our college principal for approval .Hope this helps !
2007-10-11 1:59 am
We agreed to purchase one desktop computer, one scanner and one database software after our discussion. We also required to write a proposal on what should be purchased for the approval of our college principal.
2007-10-10 7:28 pm
After number of discussions, we agreed to purchase one each of desktop computer, scanner and database software. Then, we have to write a proposal on what else should be purchased and to get approval from our college principal.
I'd made it slightly shorter
Indeed, the final sentence (in you text) is not understandable, I wrote with my assumed meaning & hope you would accept it. Thank you.
I'd made it slightly shorter
Indeed, the final sentence (in you text) is not understandable, I wrote with my assumed meaning & hope you would accept it. Thank you.
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2007-10-10 5:23 pm
Further to our discussion, we agreed to procure one desktop computer, one scanner and one license of a database software. To obtain approval from our college's principal, we are required to write up a proposal on what should be purchased.
2007-10-10 9:43 am
After our discussion, both of us agreed on purchasing a desktop computer, a scanner and a database software. Lastly, we are also required to write a proposal on what should be purchased to get approval from our college principal.
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