呢幾句既文法有冇錯?

我ｄ英文唔係太好～姑且睇一睇～

大部份都冇咩問題~只係...

1.句頭全部改番大諧~句尾加埋句號“‧”

2.OHOH, 用Oh no會唔會好d?或者只用Oh~

3.第3行that如果改用this好似好d~

4.decision 前面加番 the 或者 his 應該穩陣d~

5.改成括號 What he (wants) to do is to stop for a while and think about it deeply.
但我覺得倒轉好似會好d，即係： Stop for a while and think about it deeply, that's what he wants to do.

6.應該係 a challenge, 唔用the

7.yourself 前加 by~

唔肯定100%岩同冇漏~有錯請指出~

OHOH ! there is a lazy guy passing through the street

and the guy stop suddenly beside the crossroads

WELL, that is "the crossroads" in his life

how can he make the decision correctly?

what he want to do is stop for a while and think about it deeply




i think this is the challenge for him

no one know the end of the story

because the end is going to be created by yourself