ESSAY既格式

寫 essay 最普遍既就係
1. thesis/topic sentence

2. 論點a + example
3. 論點b + example
4. 論點c + example

5. conclusion

你個情況, 我諗應該會係

1. topic sentence/ thesis

2. Explain ur view on wt should be conserved + elaboration / example
3. How it should be conserved + elaboration/ example
4. How conservation should be paid for + elaboration/ example

5. conclusion

如果你諗唔到好多 example 既話, 寫1個你既論點 (ie. HOW it should be conserved), 然後不斷解釋解釋解釋.

記住 thesis 同 conclusion 都要簡潔有力, 但係2個唔可以重複.