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Because of the cultural value, the brand name Gucci is known to all in the world . Moreover, everyone may know that Gucci(one of the leading Groups) has a history of hundred years and its own logo printed on the merchandise. Therefore, this brand name has become an irreplaceable position in the customers' heart . Furthermore, if you are wearing a Gucci brand handbag , the others may know immediately of what the brand name is .

2007-10-06 08:54:27 補充：
(1) 1st sentence --->Unless the cultural value is available , the brand name Gucci is not known to all in the world .(2) the final sentence ----> Furthermore, if you are wearing a Gucci brand handbag, the others may know immediately of what kind of the handbags' brand name you have owned .

Because of the cultural value, Gucci is a well-known brand name around the world. Everyone knows Gucci has hundred years of history and its own brand name logo is printed on each merchandise. When people are using Gucci handbags, others will recognize the brand name and their values at once. Therefore, Gucci has an irreplaceable position in its market.

Otherwise, it had its cultural value because Gucci was known by the world to have its own brand name logo printed on the merchandise. Moreover, everyone knew it and it had a history of hundred years. Therefore, it has an irreplaceable position in the customer's heart. Furthermore, when they are using Gucci handbags, other people can recognize them quickly.