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2007-10-05 4:43 am
She makes many contributions for the world.She goes to the child whom Africa visits the third world.Give them many benevolences.Also let them know best person in the world concerns theirs..
She gets in touch with AIDS since patient.With expression to their concern and let AIDS a patient to get the other people's value.

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2007-10-05 4:55 am
She makes many contributions for the world. She goes to Africa to visit children of the third world, to give them benevolences and let them to feel the world's concern.

She gets in touch with AIDS patients and to express concern to them.
2007-10-05 4:50 am
She makes many contributions for the world.She visits children in Africa which is in the third world and give them many benevolences.She also let them know the best person in the world concerns about them.
She gets in touch with AIDS since patient.With expression to their concern and let AIDS a patient to get the other people's value.


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