幫我睇下篇文文法岩唔岩呀!唔該!

最大的問題是"I love play computer"，你是否想說「我很喜歡玩電腦遊戲?」

你這句的最大問題是love play，這兩個都是動詞(Verb)，如果兩動詞在一起，

我們通常會在中間加"to"，或把後方的Verb+ing。

所以你這句應成「I love playing computer games very much」

另外，我們通常會寫「I love Hong Kong very much」很少會說like，

你這句的文化沒有問題!

其他的都沒有什麼大問題(我想)


文法這東西是一定有錯的，但不要錯得太過份就可以了。
語言學來是溝通的，只要人家明白你的意思就可以了。
不要太介意文法的問題!
其實你的英文也不錯!

Don't use too many "I" and try to use another word to replace "I" . Because, this would let the listener feel boring.

introduce your family first
HI! My name is Ken. I am 13 years old. My parents come fr Shanghai but they have removed to Hong Kong. I was born at Hong Kong and love this place so much.

next to say about yourself
My hobby is playing computer and favourie food is Pizza. Is it your favourite food too?

final say about your school
Now, I am a F.1D student in Sunshine Secondary School. The school is located at Man on Shan. My best friend is my classmate and his name is Daniel. He is a member of school badminton team. We are studing at the same class and also join to same school team.