可以幫我睇下有無錯grammar嗎

It is Sunday morning. The airport is as busy as usual. People are walking and rushing around all over the place, you seem to be standing in the army command center. A group of flight attendants dressed neatly and tidily are walking together to the departure lounge, they look gorgeous and attracted many looks.

1)People are walking and rushing around everywhere

2) A group of air hostress dressed neatly and tidily are going to the departure lounge.

3) they look gorgeous and attractive

It is Sunday morning. The airport is as busy as normal. People are walking and rushing around everywhere, you seem to be standing in the army command center. A group of flight attendances are dressed neatly and tidily are walking along to the departure lounge, they look gorgeous and attract many sights.

wrong! you need to write " people are walking and rushing around everywhere."

無錯!!!!