可以幫我睇下有無錯grammar嗎

It is winter. The sky is still ash gray in the morning, but the spirit of the airport is already awake. The planes are waiting patiently for the guests and is ready to give the best service to them. The bulletin board is showing the instruction efficiently; the check-in counters are taking care of guests and visitors passionately;There are shops lounging lazily. Walking down to the food court, people are enjoying their breakfast like a kid eating a lollipop

almost perfect!!

It is winter. The sky is still ash gray in the morning, but the spirit of the airport is awake already. The planes are waiting patiently for the guests and ready to provide a best service to them. The bulletin board is showing instructions efficiently. The check-in counters are taking care of guests and visitors passionately. There are some shops lounging lazily. Walking down to the food court, people are enjoying their breakfast like a kid eating lollypop.

It is winter. The sky still ash gray in the morning, but the spirit of the airport is awake already. The planes are waiting for the guests patiently and ready to give a best service to them. The bulletin board are showing the instruction efficiently. The check-in counters are taking care of guests and visitors passionately. There are shops lounging lazily. Walking down to the food court, people enjoy their breakfast, like a kid eating lollypop.

*people 前面唔洗 are 同 enjoy 唔洗加 "ing"
breakfast 後面加個 commar

then it is excellent!!