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Christmas is coming. How are you going to celebrate the season in this year? I would have dinner with my family member on Christmas day. I'm desirous that you can join us to share the happiness in the near future. By the way, I am very happy to know that you have got an excellent result form ur school examination.
Please keep striving for studying. At last, wishing u have a joyful and bright Christmas holiday.

P.S. ur english isn't really bad...!! ^.^

Chistmas is coming. How are you going to celebrate it this year? I will have a big dinner with my family. I am delighted that you can join us and share the happiness with us. By the way, I am very happy for you on your high marks on your exam. Please keep up the good work. At last, I wish you a joyful and bright Christmas.

The Christmas day is getting closer. How will you celebrate during that day? I shall have a Christmas dinner with my family. I anticipate that you will also join us to share the happiness with each other. By the way, I am very glad to know that you have got an excellent result from your school examination. Please keep it on and strive for studies. Lastly, I wish you a joyful and a bright Christmas in the coming year.

2007-10-02 09:10:25 補充：
該寫為 I anticipate if you will also join us to share the happiness with each other.