✔ 最佳答案
我覺得第二位朋友寫得不錯, 值得一讚, 但請你不用介意, 我作了一點改動
I can feel Man Hon's missing has brought to his mother with a great deal of loneliness and worries. Her kid, who suffered from autism, has been missing for 7 years. This worries a lot of people. Every mother does wish her children to grow up healthily when staying with her, happily and successfully as genius. However, her child was missing, she long for his returning back from day to day. It is normal that she misses him dearly. I wish she will not give up any chance to find her son. Even though her son is not by her side, I hope she will continue to live with lots of courage.
註:
1)
Everyday 及 every day
Everyday 是形容詞
e.g. I do my everyday work.
every day 是助詞
The shop is open every day.
2) Every mother does wish her children.........
在 agreement 上, 前面用 every, 後面要單數的
3) grow up healthily
healthy 是 adjective, healthily 健康地